Mrs. Campagna's Class

A mind is like a parachute, it only works when open. -Frank Zappa

Writing Strong Comments

on September 15, 2015

One place that we like to start when learning how to blog in Room 815 is learning how to write strong comments. This is our first lesson on how what we write is written to a global audience and so we always want to make sure we are doing our best work. We also want to make sure that we are not oversharing.Β  We begin by writing comments and when we feel confident, we will know we are ready for our OWN BLOGS!!!Β  Watch the video below by Mrs. Yollis class. Your job is to write a comment below and include two things you learned about commenting from watching the video or from our discussions in class. I can’t wait to see all of our ideas combined!


23 Responses to “Writing Strong Comments”

  1. ava says:

    Dear.Mrs.C

    a strong comment is important on the blog you need to know what a strong comment is:)

    Love
    Ava.

  2. Jada says:

    Dear Mrs. Campagna,

    I loved the video, although the panda is fake. The two new things I learned for commenting are to add new information and end with a question.

    Love, Jada

  3. jessica says:

    dear mrs.campagna It is fun to learn write strong comments.ps I want to learn more on comments so I hope you teach us more.

  4. lailal says:

    Dear class,

    I watched that video and I really liked it. One of the new things I learned was to have a compliment. the other thing I learned was to start a conversation. I love writing strong comments!!

    love,
    laila

  5. Anna says:

    Dear mrs, campgna I rile liked the vitos I thingk that it was rile interesting. too thing I lrnde is to captlise all of the frst leter of the stentinse and mace sher you have punkyouyashin at the end. Con amor Anna

  6. kylee says:

    Dear Mrs.Campagna,
    I learned in the video that use complimenting and make connections.

  7. avery says:

    dear mrs c one thing I learned was to start a conversation and to add facts

  8. b-dog says:

    Dear Mrs. C,
    I learned that you can compliment them. End with a punctuation. Am I going to get interviewed tomorrow?
    love,
    b-dog

  9. darth sk8r says:

    Dear Mrs.campagna in this video I learned you need to write a strong comment is veeeeeeeeeery inportent in a
    Comment.

  10. darth sk8r says:

    Oops I forgot a ending

    Love
    Hayden

    I don’t mean itπŸ πŸ¬πŸŸπŸ³πŸ‹πŸ‘πŸ™πŸ‰πŸŠ

  11. jack says:

    Dear Mrs.c thank you for posting the video I liked it and now I no how to make a good comment. from Jack

  12. Nate hrabnicky says:

    Dear Mrs.c
    You are a great teacher. p.s. when are we going to start the bridges math program.
    from,
    Nate

  13. Barsolona 22 says:

    Dear Mrs. C,
    You should have a Capitol I by it`s self. You Should also have a punctuation at the end of a sentence.

    Love,
    Damian

    • Nate hrabnicky says:

      Dear Damian,
      Thank you for making me learn some think new. P.s. I already knew that.

      from,
      Nate

      • Nick says:

        Dear, Nate
        I think that Damian had a good tip however everyone should know that. I don’t know anybody that doesn’t know that but it was still a good tip.

        Con amor
        Nick
        P.S. The panda in the video looks like this πŸ™‚ and it should say the panda said hi kids (breathing)

  14. sherley says:

    Dear Mrs. Campagna

    A strong comment means that you have to make good connection about what the other person is talking.Also,you have to start a nice and friendly conversation.Like who wants to be mean.

    Love,
    sherley

  15. reagan says:

    dear mrscampagna
    a strong comment always need a greeting, body and a closing.

    love,
    Reagan p.s
    sorry that it
    is sort

  16. Marise says:

    Dear Mrs. C

    Thank you for sharing the video with us. I earned that you can also ask questions not just make a comment. I also learned not to use too many exclamation points.

    Love, Marise

  17. Nick says:

    Dear, Mrs.c

    I learned that you don’t add more exclamation marks you add more words.

    with love
    Nick
    P.S.I already knew that.

  18. sofia says:

    Dear Mrs.C,
    I liked the video. two things I learned is to ask questions and start a conversation.
    con amore,
    Sofia

  19. lizzye says:

    Good Morning Mrs. Campagna,
    I learned that don’t use too many exclamation marks just use more words. Also it’s good to leave a connection on your comment.
    Con amor
    Lizzy

  20. Sofia says:

    Dear Mrs.Campagna,
    Iove posting on the blog it’s so fun. I also love the video.

    Con a more,
    Sofia

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