Mrs. Campagna's Class

A mind is like a parachute, it only works when open. -Frank Zappa

Examples of Strong Work

on September 15, 2013

We have been spending time discussing how to write good, complete sentences over the last two weeks. We have related this to our 5 W’s homework that is sent home on Tuesdays. We use this homework to practice writing strong sentences but also how to respond to a question or a prompt. We focus on using our C.U.P.S. (capital letters, using the right words, punctuation and spelling), restating the question (using the words that are in the question in our response), and avoiding pronouns in our answers, especially if the question uses the noun. See the examples below for secure responses!

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7 Responses to “Examples of Strong Work”

  1. Julianne Allen says:

    Wow!What great examples! Excited to see Hadley’s work represented. She really tries her hardest and is working on her neatness. Way to go Mrs. C’s class!

  2. ian white says:

    why isnt my paper on the blog?

  3. Mrs. Campagna says:

    Ian,

    I’m so glad you are visiting the blog ! I thought I put all the “Secure” papers on this time. Is it possible I missed yours? If so , I apologize. 🙂 I will be putting up a new post soon, hopefully with pictures of all of you editing your writing. Check back soon!

    Love,
    Mrs. Campagna

  4. Hadley Allen says:

    Great job on your work, Ava. It’s very neat! Everybody did a great job. I’m so glad to be in this class!

  5. shannon says:

    Wow look at all those great examples! Good job Mrs. Campagna’s class!!!! (:

  6. molly says:

    look at all the great work!

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